Monday, March 20, 2006

Beware

I feel my mind contort, as my lungs let this seep into my blood. I feel my histamines kick in and I search franctically for my inhalers. I gasp for O2 that can't seem to penetrate this envelope of what you have spread, while my body convulses inwardly at this silent attack.

You speak, unaware of how your words diffuse into the air, thicken it with irrationality and cloud out the light of reason.

Like second-hand smoke, it sickens me the longer I inhale it without ever having converted to your blinded cult. This filthy smoke of which your words reek of. That my body fights against as my mind protests as you spread it recklessly around me.

As you morph into a preaching fool, I think to myself, "Beware of the zeal of a fresh convert".
And I slowly walk away from my friend.

16 comments:

Surabhi said...

written amazingly well!

....R.A.J.A.... said...

:-o

Deepali said...

surabhi: :)

raja: muuh kyun khula hua hai?

....R.A.J.A.... said...

who's that u killed this way? :-o

Deepali said...

i didn't kill anyone!

i think you misunderstood this piece :|

Deepali said...

ok nvm I see what you were insinuating
*big frown* I was hoping to kill you raja for taking off the blog.

....R.A.J.A.... said...

ufffffffff

I didn't misunderstand. I meant, who are you addressing as 'you' here?

(if even now u feel I misunderstood the peice, we need to talk)

....R.A.J.A.... said...

u can't kill me. if I were killable, I'd have been killed millenia ago :-p

btw, that blog is back B-)

the wannabe indian punkster said...

'beware of the zeal of a fresh convert'...
So perfectly true...
somehow this post...I cant quite put my finger on it....but it struck me on some level....
*screws up her face in a thoughtful expression*

Deepali said...

megha: i'd like to know about it too once you've figured it out :) *waits patiently*

Tushar Saxena said...

Hey you didnt reply to my comment on your birth of a new blog post so im reposting it here (yeah yeah im an attention whore:P)

Hey Dee,
Thanx for your compliments on my MSN Space. I just wanted to infuse a bit of honest reality check into the miasma of self-hating "what-did-we-do-to-make-them-animals" leftist thinking into 'root causes'. When affronted with concrete material, you could see how pathetic twitches like Akash Sen tried to prop themselves up with laughable 'intellectuals' like Naom Chomsky and Mr. Mohammad Deshmukh was forced to project a 'hurt tiger' mentality on me. This is exactly what happens when people try to escape ugly reality by wishful thinking.

Deepali said...

Tushar: haha I thought I'd comment later on and then it slipped my mind so it is good you drew attention to it again :P

I'm actually going to write a post on it since my reply to you would take up about as much space. Clearly this is not an issue I want to forget- it should be up on my other blog by this weekend if not sooner.

But let me repeat this: I loved your argument that shut up those ignorant spineless 'liberal' bleeding hearts.


p.s. I hope you blog more often and beyond your usual 4-5 lines- I find your perspective rather interesting to say the least.

Tushar Saxena said...

Hey thanx. Yeah Im a lazyass. I type when I feel strongly about something usually.
BTW, did you read all my comments on that thread of Greatbong's blog? I had maybe 5 posts on it. And if you need my perspective on any specific question, feel free to ask me! Meanwhile, I'll enjoy your musings and poetry. :D

Deepali said...

oh yeah I read all your replies on Greatbong's website. It was funny because after Akash Sen and Co. started with their typical tirade, I was fuming and itching to write a response when ......you posted just what I wanted to say [and thus saved me a lot of effort]!

I will definitely have more to discuss with you =D

Anonymous said...

FREAK

Deepali said...

Anon: Is this a certain Ottawa dweller?