Let me show
This tree of red brick
It oozes slowly
But layers thick
But layers thick
It was Maple
In a summer green
Now of this expanse
It's the Bandit Queen
I seek a time
when it wasn't so
Will these bangles show me
I must know
Pick and hunt 'em
Wipe to see
Will they bring
What I threw carelessly
These bangles
Once of colour
Remain red
Despite the rubbing fervour
Despite the rubbing fervour
But you must believe
So come let's see
There's a red
Covering a mighty tree
Stand where I stand
And tell me if it isn't true
The tree in August
Is only of a red hue
11 comments:
still playing around with the template, are we? Is this the final version?
have to fix template. my laptop is a widescreen so the settings are accordingly but I plan to change that so that it looks as I want it to for all of you guys [and girls]!
acccha, ab poetry bhi likehgne...
To be discussed elsewhere.
...from where i stand...the tree has 2 faces....like a mirror image..looking in opp directions...besides being red.
this template is nice.
:)
ptb: ji zaroor
deepak: =) you caught it! and thank you
agarwaen: twas a lot of work too!
Will be glad to have you return :)
fall fall o mighty tree.
fall just for our "dee"
awesome.
and oh you've been TAGGED!!
its a small book tag thingie. go to the dead poets society to check out how.
peace..!!
\m/
Yes, the season is slowly changing. Fall is around the corner.
so many new changes
i luv this template
n ofcourse ur post too:)
Hey...This is a nice poem thought I am sure there is more depth to it than wht can be perceived in a single read...The red tree did remind me tht fall is here, fall is here!! Even nature changes it colors I understand now...:)
southpaw: no sweat my friend september isn't far off for the next template change. Unless- I procrastinate. Again!
Manic street preacher: thank you and yes I shall get to the tag soon :)
jr's thumbprints: mmm
megha: welcome back and thank you
scribblez: :)
just browsing thru!! very well written!! cheers!
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