Dances and ice cream trucks
Breeze through dandelions
Bloodied cafeteria meals
Mardi gras presents
Flowing tresses
Lifting up their wings.
Living out
Their independence.
Ironed, noodled.
Double edged scissors.
Living out
Prisoned categories
But aren't we too old now, my friend?
We're too old.
Tears in my eyes
As a thorn pricks you
Anger in my voice
As another maims you
Prickly hugs
Shrugged away
For heavier loads
Are arriving anyway
Here, not one
but two baalish I say
We'll anchor
While you sway
Because we're old now, my friend
We're too old
Alone, they say
Those calm shoulders
Night befalls
Curtained black stars
Here let's not give up
We'll stay hidden
We're not alone
Such is our Dark Room
Whisper out to me
before the Denners seek
Mouth hushed comfort
Let creased palms meet.
Because we're not as old, my friend
Not as old
Poem
14 comments:
abey, tu abhi bhi bachchi hai B-)
LOVE THIS!
Keshi.
We'll anchor
While you sway
love those lines :)
Buccha Bahadur,
Tears in my eyes
As a thorn pricks you
Anger in my voice
As another maims you
''pollen for my hair, flowers you may keep''
:)
:) cute
http://indianhusbands.blogspot.com/2006/01/from-abla-helpless-to-ghost.html
and you will know what reality is
Nice piece this. Felt like you were bemoaning the passing away of carefree adolescence and brooding the arrival of "heavier loads", if I'm not wrong.
Liked this:
"Flowing tresses
Lifting up their wings.
Living out
Their independence."
Very visual and said a lot.
Tracked back from a comment you left on my blog.
PS: Was reading some of your 55-word stories - well written!
raja: haan toh theek haina. bacchon se fir sneh se pesh aayen aap :P
keshi: gracias!
hb: :D
surabhi: haha but uncertainity isn't so bad now is it?
anon: requoting my lines? that doesn't count for a comment you know! just for that I won't talk to you now.
southpaw: ermm thank you?
pravin: that's a new one but thank you =)
anon #2: I do not like trolls. Especially when such rubbish is linked to.
Musafir:Welcome !
can't disagree with your analysis now can I :)?
and thanks =D
''just for that I won't talk to you now.''
:( No one talks to us anyways now. No one replies to us too.
We are sad.
:(:(:(:(
anon: jo on nahin aate hain unse kya telepathy se baat karen hum :X :X
TAG!
youre it.
Go to my blog for details and other stuff :)
:) nice Dee!
i cant even think of the stuff you write about!! :D
megha: will begin work on it soon
chandni: thank you =)
Just stopped to say hello from Southpaw's blog. love these lines.
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